Valkyrie
Registered: Oct 25, 2005
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Bleedin 'ell Georf, ever since I first disembled one of your sonnets and slapped your butt with a wet rhubarb leaf you have gotten so much better at them. So much better that, personal circumstances aside, you have sprung tears to my eyes with this one. { Note to self: Maybe I should patent the Rhubarb Leaf of Improvement?} I don't have the heart to take this latest of your works to bits line by line and sort out the nuts from the rusty bolts and paper clips. Taken as a whole it is a magnificent tear jerker and along with a certain track by The Streets, I shall be weeping into my ashtray all night. Well Done Senor Sonnet! 
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az
Registered: Oct 08, 2005
Posts: 160
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Truth, Bitter Truth Where did it go to my youth,
Where did it fade away to ?
Who was it told the truth, the bitter truth,
The truth we didn't want to know ?
What is it ?? do you know ?
What is it ?? can I bear it ?
Who did it ?? do I care ?
Who is it ?? when did it happen and where ?
Why did you let me know,
How could you think I'd stand it ?
You knew I'd pay you back,
I did it, and it happened ?? do you care ?
Where did it go to, my youth ?
Where did it fade away to ?
Who was it told the truth, the bitter truth,
The truth we didn't want to know ?
Who is he ?? do you know ?
This man of power but a fool.
They said he was so high and pure,
They also said that he was cruel.
They killed him, did you see ?
They knew he couldn't take it.
They wanted lies ?? he said the truth.
They did it ?? and it happened ?? who cares ?
Where did it go to, my youth ?
Where did it slip away to ?
Who was it told the truth, the bitter truth,
The truth they didn't want to know ?
Why did you let me know,
How could you think I'd stand it ?
You knew I'd pay you back.
I did it, and it happened ?? do you care ?
What is it ?? do you know ?
Who did it ?? can I bear it ?
Who did it ?? do I care ?
Who is it ?? when did it happen and where ?
What is it ?? do you know ?
Who did it ?? can I bear it ?
Who did it ?? do I care ?
Who is it ?? when did it happen and where ?
Where did it go to, my youth ?
Where did it slip away to ?
Who was it told the truth, the bitter truth,
The truth I didn't want to know ? |
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GABBY
TMM's Disciplinarian
Registered: July 25, 2007
Posts: 3,147
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Quote: Originally Posted by ValkyrieBleedin 'ell Georf, ever since I first disembled one of your sonnets and slapped your butt with a wet rhubarb leaf you have gotten so much better at them. So much better that, personal circumstances aside, you have sprung tears to my eyes with this one. { Note to self: Maybe I should patent the Rhubarb Leaf of Improvement?} I don't have the heart to take this latest of your works to bits line by line and sort out the nuts from the rusty bolts and paper clips. Taken as a whole it is a magnificent tear jerker and along with a certain track by The Streets, I shall be weeping into my ashtray all night. Well Done Senor Sonnet!
 I FOUND ANOTHER GIRL
come back !!!!!
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Ciani
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Registered: March 08, 2007
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GABBY
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Registered: July 25, 2007
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Ciani
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Quote: Originally Posted by GABBY go after her rummy, get her back
I would love to. Valkyrie was a huge asset, both as a writer and a poster.
She used to pen our monthly "Horror-scopes".
COME BACK MISS VALKS!!
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Lacey
Registered: Aug 07, 2007
Posts: 2,117
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Quote: Originally Posted by GABBYQuote: Originally Posted by ValkyrieBleedin 'ell Georf, ever since I first disembled one of your sonnets and slapped your butt with a wet rhubarb leaf you have gotten so much better at them. So much better that, personal circumstances aside, you have sprung tears to my eyes with this one. { Note to self: Maybe I should patent the Rhubarb Leaf of Improvement?} I don't have the heart to take this latest of your works to bits line by line and sort out the nuts from the rusty bolts and paper clips. Taken as a whole it is a magnificent tear jerker and along with a certain track by The Streets, I shall be weeping into my ashtray all night. Well Done Senor Sonnet!
I FOUND ANOTHER GIRL
come back !!!!!
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